The idea has developed hugely and is currently a sensitive and mature film narrative. We need to make sure that the process that it has undergone makes it onto your blogs so that you can get rewarded for it. We also need to get cracking on a script so that we can get basting and scouting for locations. I have some location contacts for you so ask me next lesson so that you can start drafting y
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The script idea is very good - I know that it must feel like I have destroyed your draft script but I think that by the end of the session you were really seeing what I was getting at. The ideas that you had about changing the script to make it show the audience more rather than spoon feeding them were very clear and I look forward to seeing them in the next draft - as long as it does not feature Jeremy Kyle!
A very productive day with some very good scripting discussions. I think that you have the start of a very good idea and an interesting character but need to find the narrative. Make sure that you have recorded in your blogs the process and discussions that we had today because the thought processes that were taking place were very high level and you deserve to be rewarded for them. HOME LEARNING |
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